Telling a story about the past

and the choice of tense that makes the whole storyA2

In one line

The passé composé for events, the imperfect for background — and a good story has both.

Phrases

Opening a story

FrenchPronunciationEnglish
L'année dernière, …/la.ne dɛʁ.njɛʁ/last year
Il y a deux ans, …/i.lja døz ɑ̃/two years ago
Un jour, …/œ̃ ʒuʁ/one day
Quand j'étais petit(e), …/kɑ̃ ʒe.tɛ pə.ti/when I was little
Je me souviens que…/ʒə mə su.vjɛ̃ kə/I remember that
Je vais te raconter…/ʒə vɛ tə ʁa.kɔ̃.te/let me tell you about
Ça s'est passé en 2020./sa sɛ pa.se ɑ̃ dø mil vɛ̃/it happened in 2020
C'était pendant les vacances./se.tɛ pɑ̃.dɑ̃ le va.kɑ̃s/it was during the holidays

Moving the story along

FrenchPronunciationEnglish
D'abord, …/da.bɔʁ/first
Ensuite, …/ɑ̃.sɥit/then
Puis, …/pɥi/next
Après ça, …/a.pʁɛ sa/after that
Pendant ce temps, …/pɑ̃.dɑ̃ sə tɑ̃/meanwhile
Tout à coup, …/tut a ku/suddenly
Soudain, …/su.dɛ̃/suddenly
Au bout d'un moment, …/o bu dœ̃ mo.mɑ̃/after a while
Finalement, …/fi.nal.mɑ̃/in the end
À la fin, …/a la fɛ̃/finally

tout à coup and soudain signal that a passé composé is coming — a sudden event is not background.

Reacting and finishing

FrenchPronunciationEnglish
C'était incroyable !/se.tɛt ɛ̃k.ʁwa.jabl/it was incredible
J'étais très surpris(e)./ʒe.tɛ tʁɛ syʁ.pʁi/I was very surprised
Heureusement, …/ø.ʁøz.mɑ̃/fortunately
Malheureusement, …/ma.lø.ʁøz.mɑ̃/unfortunately
Depuis, je fais attention./də.pɥi ʒə fɛz a.tɑ̃.sjɔ̃/since then I've been careful
Je ne l'oublierai jamais./ʒə nə lu.bli.ʁe ʒa.mɛ/I'll never forget it
Voilà, c'est tout./vwa.la sɛ tu/that's it, that's all

What the listener says

FrenchPronunciationEnglish
Et alors ?/e a.lɔʁ/and then?
Ah bon ?/a bɔ̃/really?
C'est pas vrai !/sɛ pa vʁɛ/you're joking!
Qu'est-ce qui s'est passé ?/kɛs ki sɛ pa.se/what happened?
Et après ?/e a.pʁɛ/and after that?

Choosing between the two tenses

What it isTenseExamplePronunciation
an event, oncepassé composéJ'ai vu un accident./ʒe vy œ̃.n‿ak.si.dɑ̃/
background, a stateimperfectIl faisait nuit./il fə.zɛ nɥi/
a past habitimperfectJe prenais le bus tous les jours./ʒə pʁə.nɛ lə bys tu le ʒuʁ/
descriptionimperfectIl était grand, il portait un manteau./il e.tɛ ɡʁɑ̃ il pɔʁ.tɛ.t‿œ̃ mɑ̃.to/
an interruptioncomposé + imperfectJe dormais quand le téléphone a sonné./ʒə dɔʁ.mɛ kɑ̃ lə te.le.fɔ.n‿a sɔ.ne/
before another pastpluperfectJ'avais déjà mangé./ʒa.vɛ de.ʒa mɑ̃.ʒe/

A short story using all three:

Il était dix heures et il pleuvait. Je rentrais chez moi quand j'ai vu un homme qui courait. Il avait perdu son sac. Je l'ai aidé à le chercher.

Tense colourIts rolePronunciation
était, pleuvait, rentrais, couraitbackground/e.tɛ/ · /plø.vɛ/ · /ʁɑ̃.tʁɛ/ · /ku.ʁɛ/
ai vu, ai aidéevents/e vy/ · /e ɛ.de/
avait perduearlier still/a.vɛ pɛʁ.dy/

Read that paragraph in English and the layers are identical: "It was ten o'clock and it was raining. I was going home when I saw a man who was running. He had lost his bag. I helped him look for it." Same three layers, same three tenses.

So the storytelling model transfers completely. What you have to build is the reflex of choosing the French forms — and the one place English will not help is that its plain past ("I took the bus every day") can be either French tense. See pc-vs-imparfait.

Traps

TrapExplanation
All passé composé makes a story flatWithout the imperfect there is no background.
All imperfect and the story never movesWithout the passé composé nothing happens.
quand + passé composé interruptsJe dormais quand il est arrivé.
pendant que + imperfect is simultaneityPendant que je dormais, il travaillait.
il y a for "ago"il y a deux ans = two years ago. Not depuis.
depuis takes the presentJ'habite ici depuis deux ans — present, not past.
tout à coup is followed by the passé composéBecause it is a sudden event.

How to build a good story

three layers, and which tense each one takes

A story has three layers and each takes its own tense:

LayerTenseWhat it holds
the sceneimperfectwhen, where, the weather, how people felt
the eventspassé composéwhat happened, in order
the backstorypluperfectwhat had happened before

And always start with the first layer:

C'était l'été. Je travaillais à Paris et je n'avais pas beaucoup d'argent. — three imperfect sentences; the scene is set

Then bring in an event:

Un jour, j'ai reçu une lettre. — passé composé; the story begins

And go back if you need to:

Je l'avais attendue pendant des mois. — pluperfect; backstory

Three linguistic signals that tell the listener which layer they are in:

SignalLayerPronunciation
C'était, il y avait, il faisaitscene/se.tɛ/ · /il i a.vɛ/ · /il fə.zɛ/
un jour, tout à coup, soudainevent/œ̃ ʒuʁ/ · /tu.t‿a ku/ · /su.dɛ̃/
avant ça, j'avais déjàbackstory/a.vɑ̃ sa/ · /ʒa.vɛ de.ʒa/

In a speaking exam, control of these shifts is the difference between A2 and B1. A story told entirely in the passé composé is A2; one with an imperfect background is B1.

And this is a skill you already have in English. Every story you tell begins "it was raining and I was walking home when…" — scene in the past continuous, event in the past simple. You are not learning to narrate; you are learning which French forms carry the layers you already use.

The detail of the tense choice is in pc-vs-imparfait.

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