Connectives — the skeleton of a written text

what earns the "coherence" markB1

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In the writing section of an exam, good ideas without connectives do not get full marks — because "coherence" is scored separately.

The table

FunctionWordsPronunciation
openingd'abord
tout d'abord
premièrement
pour commencer
/da.bɔʁ/ · /tu da.bɔʁ/ · /pʁə.mjɛʁ.mɑ̃/ · /puʁ kɔ.mɑ̃.se/
continuingensuite
puis
deuxièmement
de plus
en outre
/ɑ̃.sɥit/ · /pɥi/ · /dø.zjɛm.mɑ̃/ · /də plys/ · /ɑ̃.n‿utʁ/
addingaussi (after the verb)
également
par ailleurs
non seulement … mais aussi
/o.si/ · /e.ɡal.mɑ̃/ · /paʁ a.jœʁ/ · /nɔ̃ søl.mɑ̃ mɛ.z‿o.si/
giving an examplepar exemple
notamment
ainsi
comme
/paʁ ɛɡ.zɑ̃pl/ · /no.ta.mɑ̃/ · /ɛ̃.si/ · /kɔm/
contrastingmais
cependant
pourtant
toutefois
en revanche
par contre
/mɛ/ · /sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃/ · /puʁ.tɑ̃/ · /tut.fwa/ · /ɑ̃ ʁə.vɑ̃ʃ/ · /paʁ kɔ̃tʁ/
causeparce que
car
puisque
comme
en effet
/paʁs.kə/ · /kaʁ/ · /pɥis.kə/ · /kɔm/ · /ɑ̃.n‿e.fɛ/
resultdonc
alors
par conséquent
c'est pourquoi
ainsi
/dɔ̃k/ · /a.lɔʁ/ · /paʁ kɔ̃.se.kɑ̃/ · /sɛ puʁ.kwa/ · /ɛ̃.si/
purposepour
afin de
pour que
afin que
/puʁ/ · /a.fɛ̃ də/ · /puʁ kə/ · /a.fɛ̃ kə/
conditionsi
à condition que
sauf si
/si/ · /a kɔ̃.di.sjɔ̃ kə/ · /sof si/
closingenfin
finalement
en conclusion
pour conclure
en somme
/ɑ̃.fɛ̃/ · /fi.nal.mɑ̃/ · /ɑ̃ kɔ̃.kly.zjɔ̃/ · /puʁ kɔ̃.klyʁ/ · /ɑ̃ sɔm/

English has the same inventory doing the same job — firstly, moreover, however, therefore, in conclusion. So nothing here is a new idea. What has to be learnt is which French word carries which shade, and the four pairs below are where that goes wrong.

Four pairs that are always confused

mais · cependant · pourtant · en revanche

WordThe differenceExample
mais /mɛ/neutral, spoken — "but"C'est cher mais bon. /sɛ ʃɛʁ mɛ bɔ̃/
cependant /sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃/formal — "however"C'est cher. Cependant, ça vaut le coup. /sɛ ʃɛʁ/ · /sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃ sa vo lə ku/
pourtant /puʁ.tɑ̃/surprise — "and yet"Il a étudié, pourtant il a raté. /i.l‿a e.ty.dje puʁ.tɑ̃ i.l‿a ʁa.te/
en revanche /ɑ̃ ʁə.vɑ̃ʃ/comparing two things — "on the other hand"Paris est cher ; en revanche, Lyon est abordable. /pa.ʁi ɛ ʃɛʁ ɑ̃ ʁə.vɑ̃ʃ ljɔ̃ ɛ.t‿a.bɔʁ.dabl/

pourtant carries surprise. If the outcome is unexpected, pourtant is better than cependant. It is English "and yet", not "however".

parce que · car · puisque · comme

WordWhereExample
parce que /paʁs.kə/answering "why", mid-sentenceJe pars parce que j'ai froid. /ʒə paʁ paʁs kə ʒe fʁwa/
car /kaʁ/written, never sentence-initialJe pars, car j'ai froid. /ʒə paʁ kaʁ ʒe fʁwa/
puisque /pɥis.kə/a cause both parties already knowPuisque tu le sais, agis. /pɥis.kə ty lə sɛ a.ʒi/
comme /kɔm/cause, always sentence-initialComme j'ai froid, je pars. /kɔm ʒe fʁwa ʒə paʁ/

parce que never opens a sentence except in answer to a question:

— Pourquoi tu pars ? — Parce que j'ai froid.

English "because" can open a sentence freely, which is exactly why this rule gets broken. Use comme there instead.

donc · alors · par conséquent

WordRegisterPronunciation
doncneutral, anywhere/dɔ̃k/
alorsspoken/a.lɔʁ/
par conséquentformal, written/paʁ kɔ̃.se.kɑ̃/
c'est pourquoiformal, sentence-initial/sɛ puʁ.kwa/

en effet — the classic trap

MeaningPronunciation
en effetindeed, as I said — confirming what came before/ɑ̃.n‿e.fɛ/
en faitactually, contrary to expectation — correcting/ɑ̃ fɛt/

These two are near opposites and swapping them inverts your meaning.

Il est fatigué. En effet, il a travaillé toute la nuit. — confirming Il semble fatigué. En fait, il va très bien. — correcting

English "in effect" is a false friend for en effet. en effet is "indeed"; en fait is "in fact / actually".

The skeleton of a written text

These four paragraphs get full marks in an exam:

ParagraphConnectivesPronunciation
introductionDe nos jours, …
On se demande souvent si …
/də no ʒuʁ/ · /ɔ̃ sə də.mɑ̃d su.vɑ̃ si/
paragraph 1Tout d'abord, … Par exemple, …/tu da.bɔʁ paʁ ɛɡ.zɑ̃pl/
paragraph 2De plus, … En effet, …/də ply ɑ̃.n‿e.fɛ/
counter-argumentCependant, … En revanche, …/sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃ ɑ̃ ʁə.vɑ̃ʃ/
conclusionEn conclusion, … C'est pourquoi …/ɑ̃ kɔ̃.kly.zjɔ̃ sɛ puʁ.kwa/

Punctuation with connectives

PositionExample
sentence-initialCependant, il est parti. /sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃ il ɛ paʁ.ti/ — comma after
mid-sentenceIl est parti, cependant, sans rien dire. /il ɛ paʁ.ti sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃ sɑ̃ ʁjɛ̃ diʁ/ — two commas
mais /mɛ/ and car /kaʁ/Il est parti, mais il reviendra. /il ɛ paʁ.ti mɛ.z‿il ʁə.vjɛ̃.dʁa/ — comma before
donc /dɔ̃k/ after the verbIl est donc parti. /il ɛ dɔ̃k paʁ.ti/ — no comma

non seulement … mais aussi

A two-part structure that scores well in writing:

Non seulement c'est cher, mais c'est aussi mauvais.

And in formal writing, non seulement at the start of a sentence triggers inversion:

Non seulement est-ce cher, mais c'est aussi mauvais. — literary

English does exactly the same: "Not only is it expensive, but it is also bad." Same inversion, same register.

Examples

EnglishFrenchPronunciation
First of all, …Tout d'abord, …/tu da.bɔʁ/
Then, …Ensuite, …/ɑ̃.sɥit/
Moreover, …De plus, …/də plys/
For example.Par exemple./pa.ʁ‿ɛɡ.zɑ̃pl/
However, …Cependant, …/sə.pɑ̃.dɑ̃/
He studied, and yet he failed.Il a étudié, pourtant il a raté./i.l‿a e.ty.dje puʁ.tɑ̃ i.l‿a ʁa.te/
Consequently, I'm leaving.Par conséquent, je pars./paʁ kɔ̃.se.kɑ̃ ʒə paʁ/
Since it's cold, I'm going.Comme j'ai froid, je pars./kɔm ʒe fʁwa ʒə paʁ/
Indeed, he was tired.En effet, il était fatigué./ɑ̃.n‿e.fɛ i.l‿e.tɛ fa.ti.ɡe/
In conclusion, …En conclusion, …/ɑ̃ kɔ̃.kly.zjɔ̃/

Common mistakes

❌✅Why
Parce que j'ai froid, je pars.Comme j'ai froid, je pars.parce que cannot open a sentence
Car j'ai froid, je pars.Je pars, car j'ai froid.car always follows the main clause
En fait where you mean confirmationEn effetThe two are opposites
Malgré il pleutMalgré la pluiemalgré takes a noun
Bien que c'est cherBien qu'il soit cherbien que needs the subjunctive
Donc, je pars at the start of every sentencevary themRepeating one connective lowers the mark

Why these earn marks

coherence is scored separately

In writing assessment, four criteria are scored separately:

CriterionWhat it measures
task completiondid you write what was asked?
coherencedo the sentences connect?
vocabularyrange and precision
grammaraccuracy of structures

"Coherence" is the only one you can improve with a short list — the rest take years.

A text with simple ideas that connect scores higher than one with complex ideas that do not. Assessors say this explicitly.

So in an exam:

At least one connective per paragraph, and no repeats.

One habit worth breaking if English is your first language: English conversation runs on "so", "but" and "and", and those map onto donc, mais and et. A French text built from those three reads as spoken, not written. The written register expects par conséquent, cependant, de plus, en outre — and using them is a large part of what moves a script from B1 to B2.

And an important trap: the connective has to express the right relationship. donc where there is no causal link is worse than no connective at all — the assessor sees that a list was memorised, not understood.

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